Tuesday, June 28, 2011

So kiss me.

I could have kissed you
under cherry blossoms,
pale petals drifting down
like the trees wanted to
pretend they could be
snowclouds.

I could have kissed you
in the rain, drenched to
our bones and not even
caring that the skies
opened up above us
and tried to wash us out.

I could have kissed you
in a clearing in the most
secluded woods, with
just the sound of wind
rustling through the leaves
and a few voyeuristic
finches peeping at us.

Instead, I kissed you
in the parking lot of a
Waffle House, just shy
of 2 a.m. in the middle
of a hectic week, with
our waitress grinning
at us from the other
side of the window,
because, honestly,
how could I not?

10 comments:

Furree Katt said...

i think your real kiss was the bestest ♥

Delilah said...

you are GOOD =)

nsky said...

^agreed. i don't care for the italics though.

Tinuviel said...

Haha, thanks guys. =]

Eeda said...

brilliant.

Musty said...

how could you not? Regardless It's wonderful

Opinionated Jaahil said...

ok this i really like

xyzandme said...

Parking lot sounds fun..

Sana Castellano said...

Your very own. =)

Ice Maiden said...

This was awesome! :)

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